I first saw her in my dream; a charming young lady whose face is like those of angels. She has a smile that can wipe out anyone's sorrow and eyes that seem to hold all the beauty in the world. Her captivating physique is no different from her pure heart. Oh she's perfect... simply perfect.
Her beauty is on
e that surpasses the countless faces in the crowd. A jewel in a sea of pebbles, a swan in a pond of ducks, an oasis in a land of sand, a rose in the middle of thorns and thistles, words even phrases come flooding into my mind every time i think of her. I don't know which to pick, I don't know what word or set of words would be able to convey her beauty.
"Hi elay" she came to me tapping me by the shoulder. "I'm okay, as usual" with a low voice I replied. Our minutes of conversation seemed hours. The giggles we shared are priceless. Her voice was music to my ears. I did nothing but ridicule her oh so corny jokes and taunt her punch lines but little did she know, that beneath those silly lines lies a heart that jumps in inexpressive bliss.
When will heaven grant me the chance of conversing with her again?
I guess for now there's nothing left for me to do but to steal glimpses of her...
to admire her beauty and be dazzled by her charm from afar...
to stay up late drawing images of her in my mind...
to wait... and wait
Her beauty is on
e that surpasses the countless faces in the crowd. A jewel in a sea of pebbles, a swan in a pond of ducks, an oasis in a land of sand, a rose in the middle of thorns and thistles, words even phrases come flooding into my mind every time i think of her. I don't know which to pick, I don't know what word or set of words would be able to convey her beauty."Hi elay" she came to me tapping me by the shoulder. "I'm okay, as usual" with a low voice I replied. Our minutes of conversation seemed hours. The giggles we shared are priceless. Her voice was music to my ears. I did nothing but ridicule her oh so corny jokes and taunt her punch lines but little did she know, that beneath those silly lines lies a heart that jumps in inexpressive bliss.
When will heaven grant me the chance of conversing with her again?
I guess for now there's nothing left for me to do but to steal glimpses of her...
to admire her beauty and be dazzled by her charm from afar...
to stay up late drawing images of her in my mind...
to wait... and wait
18 comments:
you're back! and it seems to me that you are in love hehe! go, go, li'l bro. :)
hey, you are baaack!
and yes, love is with you on your return. :D cool
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@elay:
may mga mas grabe pang picture sa email ko.
di ko lang nilagay kasi pati ako nasusuka.
respeto na din sa kanila. :D
OI INLAB NA ANG BATA HEHEHE..MALIGAYANG PAGBABALIK..GUSTO KO NG TMPLATE MO..PENGE SAN MO NAKUHA
@ARIS: Kuya, hehehe crush lang naman bata pa ako para sa love hehe salamat sa pagcomment
@ELIAS: Yes I'm back hehe it's been a long while since I posted anything :) thanks for being a part of my... well... return :)
@BUCO: INUULIT KO, bata pa ako para sa pagibig hehe crush crush lang :P
and you're pertaining to whom? ..your words are so delectable.. to the lucky girl that you're pertaining.. well i guess she's so lucky!!!
bakit hanggang panakaw na sulyap ka na lang? may syota na ba tong si babae? sabi nga nila ang manok mas madaling nahuhuli pag nakatali.
pero wag mong paniniwalaan yan. mas mainam na maghintay ka na lang
ilan taon ka na ba boy?
ok lang yan!
**sabay tulak sayo**
sabihin mo na ang nararamdaman mo...
hindi naman mangungulubot ang bayag mo kapag sinabi mo ang nararamdaman mo eh..hehe
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first time here!
@MITCH: seeecret hahaha
@DOUGLAS: yung huli mong sinabi ang pinanghahawkan ko kapatid.. mas maganda nga na maghintay na lang tutal bata pa naman ako e
@KOSA: 18 plang.. bata pa ko noh hehe.. salamat sa pagbisita
welcome back elayyyy!
musta? yieeeeeeeeeeee. inlababo!
@KESO hehehhe hindi naman in love crush lang hehehe.. ikaw ha..
Why wait when you can stalk her?
hehee.
sounds like an interesting girl with all those descriptives, i'm sure she's a catch. try to behold the beauty from a shorter distance. :)
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i'm back as well :) hehe!
WOOOOOOOOOW. I wish someone would write about me like this!! Super kilig. GO! GO! Kaya mo yan! She's lucky. :D
Keep writing! :D
@GLEN: Very nice idea, ill keep that in mind hahaha
@LUCAS: Yea I've doing that lately kanina nga lang I talked to her na as in parang wala lng.. Maski ung girl clueless na siya ung crush ko I hope hindi niya mahalata
@PAU: Really? nakakakilig? i'm so glad you liked it. Alam mo ba nung nabasa nung crush ko itong ginawa ko (xempre wala siyang idea na siya pala ung tinutukoy ko) she was like "waw elay ang lalim mo pala nakakakilig naman toh" hehehe
@BRUCE: ahuh? :)
Then its a siiiign! Go for it! Haha. Seriously. Super swerte niya. I can see how devoted you are with this girl. Ayiiiiiiiii~ :> Kilig ka din naman sa sinabi niya! Hahaha. :D
wow naman inlove ka pala kapatid!^_^
@PAU: oo nga eh anu ba naman kase hahahah ang lande
@SUPERJAID: uy di ako inlove crush lang.. darating din tayo jan CHAROT!
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