Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Thoughts III

"Is she here yet?", "Has anybody seen her?" My eyes were in search for a familiar silhouette as I walk around the place."Come on what's taking her so long?"

There she was making her way pass through the glass doors. The spotlights turned to her as if slowly unveiling her gentle and conservative beauty. Here she comes only a few steps away. For a swift moment the crowd seemed to have sealed their lips and all the noise has seized. Nothing can be heard from the place except for the clicking of her heels and the sound of my heartbeat.

"Elay" She uttered with a smile as she stands right in front of me. "Calm down, don't be too obvious" I whispered to myself. "Hey what's up, is she your friend?" I replied "Yes, we're going to talk about something" She answered back. All day I've been filled with sunshines and butterflies all locked up in my chest but of course I can't tell her that. I can't say "Hey I've been waiting for you all day" That would be shallow and stupid! "Okay go ahead" with a deep breath I answered.

I couldn't stand waiting so I gathered all the courage scattered in the corners of my mind and decided to sit next to her.

There we were laughing our hearts out AGAIN. Oh I wanted to just sit there and talk to her forever. I always like, wait not like: LOVE, I always love to make her laugh why? well here's the thing; I DON'T KNOW.

Another day has ended


"In all of creation all things great and small, you are the one that surpasses them all. More precious than any diamond or pearl they broke the mold when you came in this world. And I'm trying hard to figure out just how I ever did without the warmth of your smile, the heart of a child that's deep inside leaves me purified."

I posted this without editing so there may be grammatical flaws oh well it's my blog anyway. Kindly leave a comment :)

14 comments:

Jepoy said...

Sweet!

Like the song too. Good Choice of song :-D

glentot said...

I love the snow. Parang dandruff ko lang hehehe joke.

Renz said...

Nakakakonek ako :D

Superjaid said...

naks naman..i love nga talaga si ikaw kapatid..^_^

Bryan Anthony said...

right...

Pau said...

Inggit ako. Gusto ko din makahanap ng taong magiinspire sa akin magsulat ng ganyan. :>

Eli said...

HEY GUYS SORRY FOR THE LATE RESPONSE.

@JEPOY: Kuya, salamat naman at nagustuhan mo ang song hehe pinili ko tlga yan kasi filing ko sakto sa atmosphere

@GLENTOT: I'm glad somehow connectd siya sa buhay mo. I hope every time na nalalaglagan ka ng dandruff naalala mo blog ko.

@RENZ: :) salamat at nakakarelate ka... magkwentuhan tayo minsan

@SUPERJAID: crush lang di naman in love grabe ka naman hehehe

@BRYAN: left hehe just kidding... :)

@PAU: haaaay alam mo ba di ko inaklang siya ang makakapagpasulat sakin ng ganito.. minsan nasa paligid lang sila kelangan mo lamang imulat ang iyong mga mata.

Anonymous said...

very timely...so sweeeeeeeeet! :)

chingoy, the great chef wannabe said...

arrrggghh!!! swak na swak ehhehe..

mabuhay ang mga Isko!!

Eli said...

@KURI: yea I know I just loooove Valentines

@CHINGOY: Isko? anu k? taga UP or PUP?

KESO said...

wow elay, idagdag mo pa ang kanta dito sa site mo, super nice.

galing, sana gnyan ako kgling mgsulat. hehe

Eli said...

@KESO: nu kb di ako magaling, marunong lang.. hehe..

@the guy with the name written in chinese (i think): Thanks man, I'll take note of that. hehehehe

Spanky Solomon said...

ramdam ko. nice blog by the way. =)

Unknown said...

waaaaaaaaa... i really envy the way u wrte.. hhuuhu galing talaga!



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